All Comments on 'Friends - Wild Ride'

by MT1966

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not bad, but ...

This isn't a Friends story, it's a JA & CC story - but it would be better as a Friends story, because there is NO WAY that Jennifer Aniston and Courteney Cox could fail to be recognised, even out in the desert, in 2010. Furthermore, at their ages (both in their forties, Courteney well in) they definitely look mature, hardly like bimbos who have "sugar daddies". The story was reasonably well told, but it is full of minor errors (e.g. you keep misspelling Courteney) and missing or mistyped words; you could have given it a look over before posting. It also has several Britishisms: bloody and sod used as swearwords (not used in US except in parody of British English), handbag for US purse, were the ones I noticed.

MT1966MT1966over 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for you comments

The problem with me is when I start to write a story I am full of enthusiasm and energy but by the time I am almost finished writing that enthusiasm is gone and I just want to hurry up and finish the story. If I write anaother story I will make sure I double check before I post. Thanks again for the comments.

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