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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Continue?

Fun! But it stops short of being satifying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A terrific build up.

With your creative mind, I can't wait to read more!

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I'm an occasional writer, with a big gap between my last fit of writing here. My friends are my inspiration, both their stories and my daydreams about them.

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