All Comments on 'From the Curtains Again Pt. 02'

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RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
Keep it going!

I like the direction your story is taking!!

cutiegirl4004cutiegirl4004almost 13 years agoAuthor
More?

Should I continue this series or start a new one?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Interesting story....

Unlike your previous stories, there seemed to be a very quick transition from Toni in the pool to Toni dancing on the stage. Just wonder if there could be a little more of a story for that transition. I could just see Toni, dancing on the stage. She knew she had to obey your commands. James

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