by retiresoon
The ending ruined the story. I enjoyed the story. well written and believable until the last couple of sentences. I think it would have been better just to have had the experiencs and conclude the episode with the whole thing being a very enjoybe memory
I think a little more of what they saw during their spouses sexual intercourse would have enhance the story. The acutal sex acts were shorter than necessary.
Hope you will write more. realdoc
I pretty much enjoyed your story. This mirrors many situations I have known, and the one I am involved in at the moment (for years now).
Family can go beyond two adults and children. In this case, you explore the possibility of 4 adults. In my case, it's two adults, 2 males and a female.
On your comment about the bisexuality one on in the quad of the story, it turns out to be a very natural development of the relationship, for both the men and the women.
Again, a good window at our present situation as a society, and ways to move it forward towards a more inclusive view of marriage and relationships.
and this was the best of all ideas. I certainly like the way you think.
Thank you for this enjoyable read.
Bruce
I don't know if you are still around here on Literotica but here's my take on your story. I, too, was in the service although my wife and I never lived in base housing. I understand how a close relationship such as military people have can easily develop into a sexual relationship. The only problem, as I see it, is to keep 'just sex' from becoming a romantic liaison.