All Comments on 'Ft. Lauderdale'

A little long winded in the clothing and hair, etc descriptions, but overall a real good story. Proves that all work and no play is no fun--u have to mix in some fun!!

An excellent story and not just the wonderfully descripton sex. Great writer. I hope she (asumming a she) continues to contribute.

I don't mind reading long story if it is what it takes to tell, but I think this one is long winded with surplus descriptions and can be trimmed off maybe 1/3 to intensify the interest of the readers. Anyway, it is a good attempt, and pls keep going and let's see how you get improved.

Very nice story, keep writing!

Really a very good job of describing the business trip and how it all unfolded. It really is cool to read about someone's spontaneous reaction and letting things just kind of unfold and happen. More people would enjoy life if they lived it that way. The scenes were erotically and very well described throughout. The two of them on the boat was the best as it really revealed her slow acceptance of wanting David when it had not been planned that way. Also, the way you ended the story - not assuring him of anything in the future, keeps your privacy intact and doesn't get you caught up in relationships that might not work or are practical. Continued good work from your earlier stories. Many thanks!

<p>Hi Travel Girl,</p>

<p>As far as I'm concerned, this was a superb story. I loved the progression. You begin with a friendly encounter, and then take your time setting the stage as you build it up to something more. You help us to <i>feel</i> that point at which you (the lead character) realize that a new and unique experience is becoming available, and then open yourself up to the possibility, welcome it, and commit yourself.</p>

<p>At times, while reading, it feels like you could move the story along a little faster, but, with your writing, I know enough to be patient, because the payoff will be all-the-better for the build-up. In my opinion, you always get it just right.</p>

<p>Since wines figured so prominently in your story, I'll use a wine analogy. In writing, as in making wine, you can take your time and end up with a fine wine, or hurry, and end up with a bottle of 'Ripple.' Your stories are among the 'fine wines' of Literotica, and for every one of those, there are 999 bottles of Ripple.</p>

<p>I invite you to reject the notion that your writing is broken, needs work, and will improve once you learn to cut-to-the-good-parts. We're talking about a sylistic choice here, not a matter of competence. Please don't mess with your writing, but, please <i>do</i> continue to write--and do it as often as time, and inclination will allow.</p>

<p>Thanks for the outstanding, and extremely hot story.</p>

<p>Snow Snake</p>

Excellent.....As always

A long story, yes, but that is your personality and what it takes to share it wonderfully. You did say your stories are based on you experiences and therefore it needed to be told naturally, just as it occurred. It is completely believable and as I read I could just close my eyes and picture it all happening.

I have come to enjoy the slower approach to sex as you so wonderfully described. I enjoy the sight of an elegant woman and the way she displays herself can be a message in itself. Getting to know the woman, her likes and dislikes, savoring a glass of wine as you both take in the sight of each other and then the unveiling, make the sex worth waiting for. It is so much richer and pleasing.

I look forward to reading more of your work. I think we have a lot in common as far as what we enjoy in life and love.

Pegasus_ILTF

i loved the pacing, and the drawn-out descriptions. very good writing, and very erotic. travelgirl has a gift, and for one, i like a story that takes time to develop, pays attention to detail, and writes with clarity and humor. kudos to her for her time and effort.

I have only "Munich" left to read. They've all been fantastic, but I may have liked this one the best, tough call.

Please post more!

Travel Girl, you write a great story, very enjoyable.

George

ABSOLUTELY FAB STORY . GREAT WRITINS , LOOK FORWARD TO TEADING ANY OTHERS YOU WRITE

Wonderfully written!! Can you get Beth back to Florida, so they can continue the affair?

I'm sort of hoping for a happy ending.. :( but this is one of the best ive read here.. keep doing more please!

I almost fell asleep a couple times during the first five pages

I really like the stories of yours I have read, and the slow progression makes them more believable.

But Opus One with fish? It's a great wine (I have has it once or twice), but if you want red wine with fish, a pinot noir (perhaps from Burgundy) is the way to go.

I love how you write and the build up. Your stories are some of the best I've read, but I think you and stop saying you're conservative when it comes to sex.

Your stories always make me come. Unreal.

Once again Beth makes the most of her opportunities for sexual adventures. I was right there with her getting as horny as she did. Best one yet

I loved this story

Thanks for taking the time to write such a complete, and interesting, story!

This is my most favorite, Story and wow it was like I was right there in the story, getting excited right along with the characters. Feeling what they were feeling at the time. I could help but grow hard as you sucked them from soft to hard.

Ienjoyed all of your story and will look for you again.

We'll done. It's a wonderful tale written by a woman, not for men, but for women, as evidenced by the extremely detailed descriptions and more extensive backstory. A male version of this same story would be 3-4 pages and omit much of the background and surrounding detail. This version is so much richer and immersive as a result. As a guy, I really enjoyed it, though it took a little getting used to initially once I realized I'd have to wait a bit for my cookie. It was well worth the wait. Excellent job!!

What a great story Thanks wish you would do more.

Your stories are really well written and have a reporter's eye for detail. I hope you return and write more.

However, mirrors how good of a lay this slut likely is. Sounds like a self centered over indulged sack of potatoes. A shame there isn't a "Zero Stars" rating.

10 pages of boredom. The only interesting thing about it is what an inconsiderate whore she is. Get a vibe and a conscience. You people must be hard up to enjoy this slop. Stop writing please!

...Because they won't let me select ZERO. What a narcissistic piece of drivel. And the pathetic older dude parading her around while she cuckolds him with Guido and his unskilled genitals. I swear some of these dolts would read a single sentence that had COCK BUSH CUM SPLAT GRUNT SQUIRT SCREAM and give it 5 stars.

What an annoying piece of crap. An spoiled, self important Bee-Yatch who is a lousy lay AND a slut. Thankfully this lame broad seems to have stopped pumping out this drivel, like the sea of cum that likely would dribble out of her over-used holes.

A 10 page story that should have been a 2 page story, it was flowered out and ended up as crap

5 plus stars just to override some of the chicken shit anonymous pricks comments! Very well written, maybe a little long, but that's ok because a lot of readers enjoyed it. You can't cockold someone that wants you to enjoy yourself. Wish Travel Girl was still writing.

Too bad the readers who want nothing but hot sex made a wrong turn here. If you read TG's stories, you know she doesn't write that way. I enjoy getting to know the character(s) in her stories. Yes, it's a bit patronizing, but even that reveals who she is.

What a fantastic story! Yes, the sex was HOT! but your storytelling is what makes this a best ever type of read. Looks like you've been retired for a while, but you are a great, great writer of sexy material. Hoping for more!

It was ready long, but worth the read.

I have commented before that your stories seem a bit too perfect to be true, but I still enjoyed it, especially the group sex.

Thanks

I love your recounts, especially the detail in the pivotal moments when you're considering progressing to the next level.

:-)

It took 8 fucking pages of fucking boring bullshit for u to tell us that u let some old guy get u.....8 fucking pages...wtf is wrong with you....plz don't write in this site again...write this shit on your science websites

disagree.

Well done!

Not one of the one page slam bam stories, though some authors have been able to pull those off also.

The hottest story I have ever read, MMMMMMMMMM

Again, really fun to feel that sexual ramp - from the long slow buildup to more and more heat and action. Yummy!

Great sexual romp. I would love to chat with Travel Girl, I bet she can tell a sexy story of two. Writes great sex, from experience I think.

One comment. Beth is a professional scientist giving an invited talk at a scientific meeting. But here professional expertise is completely ignored as if it were of on importance. I think this part of the story is sexist when it does not need to be.

Simply loved it! It was wonderful!

It was fantastic! Loved it!

Smooth...Sophisticated...and Savvy!

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