by person4444
That was a really bad story. Wish I could give negative stars. Obviously he's not very good if he can't get her to cum. The spy did. His fault not hers.
I don't know about you, the author, but I find these anonymous negative comments hilarious--when they're posting on my own stories. Here it just seems like he's being a dick for the hell of it. This was quite erotic; I'm a fan of female submission so this was a very tasty morsel. Whether it's a one shot or part of a series I'm unsure but on it's own it really works for me. I'd definitely like to read more about fuck dolls from you.
Stone
I totally disagree with the person who said this is a bad story. Just because the characters don't feel the same way that you do doesn't make it a bad story. That's how close minded people think. I personally feel that this is a decent story.
I think that was a really well done story I can't wait to read the next one