All Comments on 'Fuck Me While They Watch'

Feels a little rushed but got the point across... Good for now, read more later.

I hope you enjoy the edit, I added more detail. :)

Great short explosion of steamy, fiery sex! Reading about the slow buildup of passion is fun, but it's great to get caught up in a story that captures overwhelming lust that demands immediate, powerful satisfaction. The subtle little side notes, as she makes eye contact with her former lover and he with the woman who is so captured by their moment that she can't stand still, provide plenty of depth. Well done, indeed...please write more!

A fiery little tale, with the air of truth. Look forward to hearing more of this couple's adventures. (I do hope that couch was Scotchguarded.)

"... and the excitement in the air had the taste of youth and vulgarities."

A skillful combination of a dirty story with some lit touches like the clause quoted above. Well done.

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this was so very hot and horny, had me hard from start to finish.

very erotic and so so exciting more please .