by scarletoharden
It's more of a description of a sex scene than a complete story. It ended just when it was getting interesting.
Not a bad first effort, though. Keep writing. In general, I try not to start writing a story until I know how it will end. This one cries out for an ending.
I was broken in by 3 workmen in a Park after school when I was 15 it reminded me of that day thanks for sharing
Hannah x