All Comments on 'Fucked In Every Hole by Strangers'

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swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Solid first effort

It's more of a description of a sex scene than a complete story. It ended just when it was getting interesting.

Not a bad first effort, though. Keep writing. In general, I try not to start writing a story until I know how it will end. This one cries out for an ending.

Loves_music_loves_to_danceLoves_music_loves_to_danceover 9 years ago
Agreed.

More please! I liked it a LOT...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I was broken in by 3 workmen in a Park after school when I was 15 it reminded me of that day thanks for sharing

Hannah x

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