by quimmaster
you should change your nickname.... i wish my first anal experience was as considerate and as sexy as that.... well written!
Wonderful story! I can only wish my first anal experience will be as good as that. Keep writing.
the only problem I had with it was the terminology. it seemed a bit too clishe
Awesome, awesome story. One of the best I've read on this site. I'm just blown away. You should definately keep writing.
Truely an inspiration! I too hope my first anal experience is as delicious as that was.
This is the best story that I have read on the site. It was wonderful and really turned me on. I love your work! Please keep writing for us!
Great work, just try to keep words like 'stunning' or 'magnificent' for crucial moments - they're strong words and shouldn't be overused. Also, titflesh is just ugly. Otherwise great job, keep it up!
The first two times, they were fucking. The last time is clearly love making. I can see the images lucidly in my head with all the details given. Wonderful work! Love to see more from you.
Let me just say that until now, I have been disgusted by anal sex. However, the way this story is written is nothing short of amazing. Keep writing, and you will make more believers. This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I expect it to stay that way. Good luck!