All Comments on 'Fucking Franics'

I liked it.

I loved it. I need to piss right now so badly and I just wish I could find someone here in WA that would let me piss on their cock just like this guy in your story did. But since I don't I guess I will just go stand naked in the bathtub and let the warm piss flow down my legs and be satisfied with that. Ah well.

words in the title spelled incorrectly, but you redeemed yourself on that score.

While you have to admire a woman who can pee non-stop for five paragraphs, it's not really my thing. It guess some people dig it though, so urine in good company.

Still, I was left with one thought: I hope this took place at her house so his place won't smell like piss for the next several years.

hi i just wanted to say how hot this was. i am a senior male who loves a wonderfully hot wet golden shower. i hate having to waste a good load of piss in a toilet. oh well not to many men or women out there who also enjoy it as much as i do. maybe i will find one some day,who knows. any way i loved your story,thanks.

Loved the story, but I would have carried it further, where he actually got a TASTE of her pee ! Maybe, just maybe, he would have wanted to taste more ! I know I would. If any woman wants to pee on me, or in my mouth, I would love to have you do it !!

I found your story on the favorites list of someone who commented on one of mine, and now I know how a good piss story is written!

The long slow build up created a great tension which lead to the ultimate release.

Well written and we'll done.

--peebudy