All Comments on 'Fucking Franics'

I found your story on the favorites list of someone who commented on one of mine, and now I know how a good piss story is written!

The long slow build up created a great tension which lead to the ultimate release.

Well written and we'll done.

--peebudy

Loved the story, but I would have carried it further, where he actually got a TASTE of her pee ! Maybe, just maybe, he would have wanted to taste more ! I know I would. If any woman wants to pee on me, or in my mouth, I would love to have you do it !!

hi i just wanted to say how hot this was. i am a senior male who loves a wonderfully hot wet golden shower. i hate having to waste a good load of piss in a toilet. oh well not to many men or women out there who also enjoy it as much as i do. maybe i will find one some day,who knows. any way i loved your story,thanks.

words in the title spelled incorrectly, but you redeemed yourself on that score.

While you have to admire a woman who can pee non-stop for five paragraphs, it's not really my thing. It guess some people dig it though, so urine in good company.

Still, I was left with one thought: I hope this took place at her house so his place won't smell like piss for the next several years.

I loved it. I need to piss right now so badly and I just wish I could find someone here in WA that would let me piss on their cock just like this guy in your story did. But since I don't I guess I will just go stand naked in the bathtub and let the warm piss flow down my legs and be satisfied with that. Ah well.

I liked it.