All Comments on 'Fulfillment'

dude this story rocks... is there going to be a sequal? i hope so.. i loved the added spice of them rushing to finish before their mother showed up. i will be intrested in seeing more of the story if you decide to write it

great story, but your not done. bring the mom in on this!

What a great hot start! I guess the photo album is the clue to the next part of the story, eh?

Lukas

I'm so wet after reading that. Wish I had a brother who would take care of me like that.

just fantastic! i liked the way you left descriptions of appearances to a minumum. the mind is a wonderful thing, it fills in the blanks. i saw Tara as a dark sultry beauty with killer eyes, and beautiful copper brown tan, long straight dark hair, and a long lithe body. Mom was quite a looker too!

keep up the great work.

Poor fucker never had a chance. A brainless dick will give you away every time. Great story! Good start.

Great story. Looking forward to future episodes!

Loved that... totally rocked

totally unrealistic if he was so confused and conflicted about his feelings for his sister there is no way he would go to his mothers house when she was there he would make sure he only went when he was sure she was somewhere else keep it beleivable or put it in the fantacy area

I loved that story it rocked dude