All Comments on 'Fun in Rio'

I had a tough time staying with the plot from the first, trying to subconsciously understand what a "squelching sound" made by a pussy is about. Then, later one bitch said; "Started with me you little bitch!"

I give up...

Like your stories very much. Nasty sluts doing nasty things. Please write more.

Love the roughness, the transition from prim and proper to full out slut. It would be great to see more about Kelly and Alexis.

I loved it. I got so wet my cunt was dripping. I loved how nasty and rough it got, soooo good.

where is part 2 of this story