All Comments on 'Fun in the Pool'

Thanks.

Join the vast majority of the world who uses "ass" not "arse" and lose the localized ism's.

You wrote a great story, I say ignore the previous comment. Anyone who has a negative comment to make should at least have the balls to use their own name. I would like to see you add to this story, it has the potential to get super steamy.

in english, -isms and arse are both correct.

I hope you'll be writing more.

Thanks for the contribution. Great story, well written. That really brings back memories for this 58 year old who is long, long past his first awkward attempts at sex. I hope you keep writing and contributing, you really made my day a bit brighter.

one of the best stories i have read for a while

Wonderful story -- keep writing!

there is a sequel here. how will her fantasy of a threesome with bobbie and brett go? and with john?

this is the best story I have ever read. amazing description and the whole idea and narrative of the story was incredibly well planned out.

write more please.

my pussy is begging to cum more to your stories ;)