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by julesteve

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LJJLLJJLover 5 years ago
5 Stars

I love the rules they set out for this - makes it seem much more attainable and realistic for me as a woman than all these exhibition stories where the lady lets herself be abused by a stranger, so I'm very happy with this :)

ChrisDo68ChrisDo68over 3 years ago

Your writing is beautiful! Love it! ...and reading your stories makes me hard immediately...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really LOVED it: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0 = 100%)!

This story is (a) very very erotic, and

(b) totally true to life. It was brilliantly conceived and masterfully crafted.

You managed to tell this story on less then a page. In my lay opinion, you fairhfully followed Chekhov's gun principle in that endeavour. (👍)

The female character is a keeper. Full stop.

Thank you for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

👍👍!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

❤💚❤💚❤ (5)

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Hi, I'm Juliet. I like to share tales from my sexy adventures. I love the outdoors because the chance of being caught is so exciting it makes everything so much naughtier; semi-nude in public and 'accidental' flashing ending in mutual masturbation are my favourite things to do...