All Comments on 'Gabby's Tale'

grat writing would love to read more.

really hot love the slut daughter,, graphic but not one of those overly graphic things telling of each stroke thats what imagination is for, this directs the imagination greatly.

You are writing every fantasy I've every had; it's perfect. Please... more!

write more that was a dam hot story dont stop till your on chapter 96

Yes, yes, I want more, great job can't wait for more.

Oh yes honey!!! This is a hottttt story!!! And what a daughter!! Wouldn't I love to have one like that!!! Oh yeah--to train and use to my heart's content!!! But I would also have to be sure she was totally satisfied too----if for no other reason than to keep her mine!!!

You write a great story honey--please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter and then keep them coming and cumming!!!

Loved it!!!

Too fast for me but hot none the less. Please fuck her more and tell us about it.

Cant to wait to read how Daddy uses his little pain slut and who he makes her fuck. Loved the story I am dripping for a hard Daddy!

As a dirty old man, this is a great story makes me wish I had a little girl

Best one i have read yet....how he makes her think he is innocent in this, like he hasn't been planning it for 4 years, great! The sex is hot...more more more!

Its nice to be turned on by something that's well written (right AND left brain enjoyment! :))

Marvelous job, and as hot as arizona asphalt. Keep up the good work.

snowtiger

this story is the best i have ever read, and ive read a lot! it made me finger my pussy like theres no 2maro!

Damn that was the best story i've read in awhile! Thanxs for the orgasm

loved it!!

I would love to pound the authors hot cunt and asshole over and over with my long, hot HARD cock...MMMMMMMMMm

Jay

that was hot. send a second installment in soon.

Brings back memories of the good ole days,when i was just a sweet young girl, if i only new then what i know now

Best story ever loved the line tomorrow im fucking your ass nice

I look forward to your next chapters~~~

Fucking Great

it brings back some lovely fucking memories

More PLEASE

Sizzling hot. And so am I now. The words are so right. Just what I need. Thank you.

well writen story thank you

That was so damn hot. I'm absolutely dripping just reading it. Only thing would have made it better would be if he had cum in her cunt and not withdrawn. Got her knocked up with his seed - awesomeeeeeeeee. Can't wait for next chapter. Love you. Summer xx

This was a really great story. So when do we get to hear about him ripping into her tight ass?

i love that story my pussy is so fucking wet. the control of his daughter is wonderful i cant wait for you to write more, and neither can my pussy.

My fingers are buried in my pussy! Loved it.

So hot when he came on her face...gobs of cum..I could taste it. I'm so wet.

Sick

That was great, I came twice. Look forward to more. Really liked ur lingo, wasnt too predictable.

I was really enjoying the story untill it said that he had an 11" cock and that ruined the story for me.

One of if not the best story I've ever read. It made sense, could picture it happening. It showed a father that truly cared about his daughter yet knew what they both needed. As one that treated my sister very much the same way and made her into my cum whore to be fucked by me and or anyone else I decided to give her to. She enjoyed her life as a slut and existing only to please me. Since only the two of us lived in the house she was required to always be nude unless i approved something different. We both loved the life together. I wanted to knock her up but I had gotten the operation a few years prior to her growing up so that was out of the question and I didn't want anyone else to do it. I made it very clear that she was to go on the pill and never fuck anyone else without my permission and presence. I taught her how much of a whore she was by selling her body with the three of us present when I collected the money for her pussy. I also progressed to the point where I'd eat the cum mixture out of her pussy and or ass once the guy or guys had gotten off their load of cum. As time went on I got into sucking cocks and taking them up my ass. it became her job to find the meat to satisfy my needs. I also bought her a very large strap on dildo to fuck me with. i became a whore also which made our life even more enjoyable together. I even got into crossdressing and fucked her as a woman and she fucked my ass that way. We enjoy life to it's fullest.

awesome story old now but as hot and horny as the day it was written. brilliant writing a true great writer. love this first part after fing this to day.

The average depth of a woman's pussy is four inches. Where are you going to put the other seven inches? I stopped reading because I could already feel the pain. Get real!!

This is fantastic, turned my innocent wife into a. Sub slut and introduced my big titled daughter to my fellow Dom who seduced her and her best friend

I love it

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