by oldhippie1949
Your writing is so sensitive. Nice to see in a man's writing. Very nice.
A Good story, with some sad content, but without any childish stereotypes.
wow that story was amazing, so perfect, it truly does hit you in the right spots!!!
This was a most original story and very well told. I found myself brought into a tantric and delightful state of mind by your characters. I would love to know how Ray and Gail fare, and perhaps if they meet up again.
score them--The dowbgrade here is for the asshole play. The rest was very nice
Good story well told. I belive that if we live long enough then tragedy will play its part. . It was great that you had two such caring friends to get you through.
And well worth maximum points,Lesbians are lovely,cant say the same for gay men.Heterosexual male
I found your story to be very touching, as well as erotic. It made for a beautiful story of people healing each other. thank your for sharing