All Comments on 'Game Night Ch. 02'

A good improvement, but still a little short. I would have liked to hear about their time in between stories, especially early on that first week.

This story was awesome, and it was a definite improvement over the last one, but I could've used more details. I know it's hard to crank out a three-pager, but take solace in knowing that my only criticism is that you left me wanting more.

Neat story, gentle, clean, "normal", nothing violent or even suggestively violent. Thanks.