All Comments on 'Gameshow Ch. 02'

This is a very original concept, and I am looking forward to seeing the coming chapters. It's nice to see an original story on this site.

very good start. can see lots of possibilities

This is a fantastic story so far, and I can not wait for the remained of the story.

The last two chapters were a great start! Excellent detail for the character. Maybe consider writing longer chapters though?

I vote for yin-yang. It's scary, it's intense, but it's not too terrible. She becomes surprised at how much enjoyment she gets from it, and at a certain point, makes the decision to pursue sexual pleasure.

Please, please, submit the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens and neither can my wife!

I love seeing the comeuppance

I tried “suspension of disbelief” but my disbelief laughed so hard it died from lack of oxygen.

The game show is by its nature immoral from her point of view. It’s not a dumb ass test of faith, why would God protect her modesty when he/she/it doesn’t stop wars or cure sick children? She’s not more deserving of protection than a sick child or victims of warfare. I know I’m repeating my comment from the previous chapter I’m just stunned at how shallow and crass you are. OMFG does that make you a Trump supporter?

Tess (UK)