All Comments on 'Garbage Man'

Nice but very unreal. Too short and left out too many details. should of been longer and built up the story.

Direct and to the point. Not sure if it would work like this in real life but what the heck, this if fiction. Way to go Garbage Man.

Six stars!

Where is the story? You missed it.

No protagonist, no conflict, no doubt, no suspended disbelief. This is a story written in obituary format. Just plain old fashioned lousy.

this is a wonderful story hoping for more

about the lives of these two and where they ended up in there love.

had to look and found it was written in 01

so there wouldn't be a part 02

thank you

Most of your stories start well, then a hurried up ending leaves them unfinished, and not fulfilling. Please revisit and finish.

A good story BUT its a story line that you could have done so much more with. maybe you could revisit it at a later time. Good luck and keep up the good work

I guess I'm just an old "softy". Brought a tear to my eye,

Keep up the great work.

cheers

Silkydave