All Comments on 'Gemma's Regret Ch. 01'

Keep going!

... and an excellent first submission! Welcome to Literotica and thank you for this quite stunning first chapter of what I am sure will be an excellent story. However, you ought to consider carefully the things you have written before posting to see if you might have said them better: eighteen-year-old breasts? - it almost suggests the rest of her is some other age.

Try moving your words around; sometimes they just fit better when they are rearranged. Apart from that, very well done - five stars!

Oh yes! I cant wait for the next chapter!