by Mr. Marvel
One of the bet i've read - lets not give up on saving the universe.
I loved this story, glad you came back to it. I was worried you would not continue it. Keep up the good work.
i really love these series. checked like 3 times per week if u kkept this up. worried like some others if this was abandoned. yeah, could have been decent without the silly grammer and spellings. by the way, keep it up!
glad to see that your keeping the story going, was afraid that you might have let it die, but glad to be wrong. keep it up
Are you actually a writer for maybe the Sci-Fi channel... no wait.... your stuff is ten times better. I have only one complaint, i lost a whole day off of work because once i started your story i just couldn't stop reading. Can't wait for the remaining chapters.
keep it coming, this would make a great flick. cant wait for next chapter.
Like others I was worried that you'd abandoned this story... Can't tell you how glad I am you've continued it!
I was excited to see another post in the story. Please continue it.
once agin you have shown up all other writers in the site wih your creativity
Keep em comeing
Granted, I have no idea why it's on THIS site.. but still, absolutely awesome. Keep it up, and count me amoung the many that are likely waiting for the next installment.
i love the series. but i was wondering when are you going to add new installments to it?
since the author obviously quit, does any1 have any recommendations for something similar?
Your spelling and grammar is atrocious! You don't distinguish between to and too, "short sidednes" should rightly be "short sightedness" and there are many more errors that are too numerous to mention. You make a great story laborious to read. Get an editor or proof reader!!!!