All Comments on 'Genetic Sexual Attraction Ch. 01'

That needs a sequel.

....tears of happiness and joy, she had finally found her brother!

....and they lived happily, ever after.

The end.

Well done overall. Seems set up for a part 2, don't u think? If so, might need to work on the transitions in location, and probably expanding on details. A few mins in a bar leading to a quick love session is OK for short stories... not so for multiple part stories.

I'm glad you never added to the story, fiction story with a grain of truth behind

A well written story. absolutly needs a sequel. And is made all the more intricate by the fac this can happen and is a true affliction

... at least a second part so we know what they did once they found out. I really liked this and not knowing what is to happen next will drive me nuts.

It definitely needs a sequel. I hope you get around to writing it someday.

Beautiful tale! (But I already said that!). Different plot than any other I have read. A sequel is definitely needed; please do that soon! I loved it.

more more!!

I need the next part. Keep it coming!

Please post chapter 2 soon.

It ended way too soon. If it had been a little longer, it would have gotten a 100. As it is, it gets a 75.

gonna need chapter two sooner than later!! Okay? Good!

dude how you going to stop there come on you gotta make more finish the stroy you left me hanging