All Comments on 'George and Shawna Ch. 04'

I get so tired of these fragile, wounded men that every story in LW seems to feature. Immature, over-reactive, incapable of insight, zero understanding of the female psyche, little boys who are more interested in becoming the walking wounded and carefully nursing their hurt instead if talking it over and really communicating. Figure it out. If you need to burn the bitch, burn her and move on. If you need to love her and reconcile, then get back together. But wallowing in self-pity is pathetic and so damned uninteresting.

You are definitely a good writer, the questions you ask when analyzing emotional responses are so real and poignant. You actually immerse yourself into the characters in a realistic and intelligent manor. I do not tire of reading your stories. 5/5

It took him an awful lot of time, but he finally woke up and decided to stop being a teenager about the situation and start acting like a man. Well written, I liked it!

There is zero respect from her end. Using others men's cum as a lubricant and expecting him to fight for her? Are you serious? She is 100% a HOE by definition and the characteristics will never change. She has zero value to him.

At least, this is one story that JPB ended.