All Comments on 'George and Shawna Ch. 04'

I think this is probably your best.

Good to see someone could work things out and that GLEN got his to the Point of having a hard time of doing sex

Well ---the ending was alot better than the middle!!!!

the bastard...that way shawna would know what would happen to any others if she fell again....and why not mel and tody also

thanks for that baseball bat at the end.this was one of the best you have written.you went deep on this story,mentally.

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....but a decent build up and a good clean ending. The story worked, although stretched a few points too long, but it never evoked the emotions that your truly good stories can and do. It was a far cry however from your one from column A and one from column B mass stories that you churn out at times. Thanks for trying and writing a good story.

She did NOT make a "whopper of a mistake". <b>This was a character test.</b> And Shawna repeatedly Lied and failed to deal with George's anger. What changed Shawna's attitude?

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Recall it was when she ran into George Twice in the same night. I mean its laughable.! THAT is what caused her to think "we were MEANT to be together!". Something that stupid and irrelvant.?

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The thing is Shawna doesnt wake up and suddenly realize what she had done. Until the meetings at the nightclub and the resturant She is filled with HATE and RAGE towards George because he dared to get angry over her actions.

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Recall in chapter 2 how she started to have sex with George then left him hanging with a erection. That was an Intentional act.

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In some ways she was Honest: Shawna boldly stated that wants to be a submissive towards other men but she will NEVER let her own husband do that to her.

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Invariably when authors get trapped by their own extreme revolting impossible stories they ALWAYS go back to Make pride / male ego.

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The submissive issued is never mentioned. Shawna's cruel and inhuman sexual acts towards her husband are never mentioned. Somehow by chapter 4 George is the one who cheated and fucked up.

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amazing isnt it?

This is story for man in high heels and nylons.very stupid story

It was superb as it was engaging. I waited with absolute fascination as each chapter unfolded. The characters may be flawed, they may not follow someone's idea of logic, but they were alive and took possession of our emotions. To me this was a story of hope, courage and quest for happiness.

A masterful story from a true master who has evolved into someone who keeps us wishing that he will throw another priceless, yet free gem our way. Very grateful for your generosity JPB. Looking for more, as always.

I said it earlier and I'll say it again -- I don't mind Recounciliation, but there should be a <b>Valid<b /> reason for it<p>Shawna was still a cheater -- She says that she'll go <i>straight<i /> home, but takes a turn (Left-Right, whatever)and ends up in the back seat of Mel's car having sex twice with him.<p /><p>I told you both were playing games in which no one was going to be a winner. Shawna slept with 3 guys and George only 1(Carol). Shawna was and IS still a selfish -- She feels sorry for Mel and is upset that he's left still hard, but she leaves her own husband of 16 years on the verge of orgams. Tell me will you accept such a woman as your wife?<p /><p>Give me one good <i>reason<i /> why both should stay together?<p /><p>If someone continues this tale -- Shawna and George will get <b>Divorced<b />.<p/><p> P.S --<i>Shawna is like a <b>Beast<b />Who tasted blood and once a Beast tastes blood......There is no turning BACK<i /><p>

Oh well, I'm sure in chapter 4 he will catch her fucking around again then spend 2 more chapters deciding whether to wimp or not to wimp, then take her back yet again. Good writing but awful ending.

I make fun of Bob a lot. And in this story I hated some of the direction. However, in this story, he did not just mail in the ending. His characters stayed true, they were both fucked up, but true. The thing that annoys me about Bob, and to be honest, why I bother reading his stories, is that every now and then, he proves himself to be a writer, not just a purveyor of sleaze. And those moments are very good.

I make fun of Bob a lot. And in this story I hated some of the direction. However, in this story, he did not just mail in the ending. His characters stayed true, they were both fucked up, but true. The thing that annoys me about Bob, and to be honest, why I bother reading his stories, is that every now and then, he proves himself to be a writer, not just a purveyor of sleaze. And those moments are very good.

One aspect I think you nailed on the head here is that men and women treat sex differently. He act of first cheating on him/falling, was bad, but how a man treats what happens afterwards is very different from a woman.<P>

He cheating was painful to both of them, but what a man's normal, valid reaction to do is to shun her, not show her love. The womans reaction is more along the lines of "I fucked up. I'm hurting from this act that I have done that has hurt both of us, hold me, love me."<P>

His withdrawing from her was exactly the wrong thing she needed at that time. The intimacy, the holding, even the sex was what a woman needs after a fight. It ain't logical, but Bob here illustrates it, that her need for intimate touch and connection and emotion was what she desperately needed from her husband, which he refused. So she sought it elsewhere, even though she loved and wanted her husband.

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I'm not saying it makes sense, but it's kinda the way a woman reacts vs. how a man reacts, and Bob, you did a good job showing us this.

From "0" to "100". Whatever turns you on. Different strokes for different folks. One thing that JPB does well,is either turn people on or piss them off. ML

are People are people like it or not they are going to do things you dont agree with jpb writes the whole gamult and the stories are always entertaining so if you dont like it stop reading his stuff.

Some would call her a cheater...and she is; but so is he. For those who would demand retribution for her actions, well, all I can say is that it must be nice to live in such a black and white world. They both fucked up but if they love one each other, they can learn and grow stonger together.

ufa.... No closet. There were some really deep problems here. I would say that is not for us to decide what is best for them. If they got back together again and are happy, that is what counts. Basically the truth is that the old familiar can get boring, but it is often the best.. She liked what Glen did to her, but she disliked him. That is a fascinating situation. She can end up with nothing because of this, but in this case she got very lucky. Of course, her guilt forcing her to confess is another important element that makes her different from many other women.

Thanks, JPB.

I told you don't write off Bob & you are just a small "kid" so back off. Great ending Bob. They both are good together.

is not enough! what happened in this six month ? I ask because it seems you forgot one thing. there is a guy who has been married an eternity to a woman with whom he had only vanilla sex. she denied him almost everything cause she told him it's dirty. now he had to learn she gets off a 100 times when pushed to be a fuck puppy. cumming in all her holes she denied him for the whole time. so what is a guy to do? have vanilla sex again? maybe she gets an orgasm? and what about her? she knows I just need bully asshole and have 10 or more orgasms instead of none or one? so how do they cope to this problem? a lot of un answered questions.

JPB,

I have never been a huge fan of yours, but I have always admired the "quirkiness" of your stories (ala David Lynch). But this was just dumb. Two kids and a fifteen year history won't keep wifey's legs closed but bumping into him at a few places is "fate"? And wifey liead all the time! How the Hell can that be a foundation for anything good?

And we all know how much you Brits prefer Large women who can make you lick their boots etc....pistolpackinpete

I have to admit that I didn't like a lot of your stories in the past. However, I have enjoyed reading this one, well done. CheersRoger.

But every now and then, 1.1% of his efforts are not wimp male figure included and this offering is is part of the 1.1%. Well done, JPB to bad you did not explore this angle a lot more because you have proven you are cable of this plot line.

Thanks Bob, A good story with a good beginning and a good ending, with the middle of the story very erotic. Well done!......Rich

She screwed up - royally - as the story says, a drunken one-time infidelity MAY have been forgivable - but all night and AGAIN in the morning while speaking loving words on the phone to her husband - WOW.

And her way of showing how sorry she was and make amends was to go out and fuck 3-4 other men - how cute.

Her character is quite disclosed throughout the story - and the best solution for both of them, would be a divorce.

Getting back together is not a good idea - her goods are simply too damaged - That way she gets to fuck around and he gets another chance to find a true woman.

it was jpb, didnt look at author, just read the story and liked the end so looked.

Far and away the best. More depth and development than any other JPB story.

I enjoyed most of it and it pulled me through the tale. I suppose it's nice that Glen got some payback for being a predator but he was only the match for Shawna's fuse. She's a slut. That can be OK. Some women can control their inner slut and direct it toward their husband. Some realize they should never get married because they cannot control their inner slut. The problem here is that she only allows herself to be a slut with other men, NOT her husband. She is enthusiastic and out of control when she has sex with other men. But just wants nice,nice sex with her husband. She refuses to GIVE herself to her husband. She refuses to allow herself to get out of control with George. She SAYS she is only connecting to other men to give herself sexual relief BUT with all of them she has WOW out of control sex. But not for George. And she wants to keep George on the leash. No pushing me or I'd leave you. When you push I respond unhappily and coldly. There is this sexual dynamo inside and she refuses to release it to her husband. That is a bigger betrayal than the sex. Also the goodbye sex for Mel is a pure betrayal of her promise. She knows that what she said gave George the expectation that there would be no further sex. George specifically ASKS what she is going to do with her date and the answer she gave would lead anyone to expect her to go home without sex. But less than an hour after her promise she breaks it and once again is out of control. She is not a very admirable woman. It must be nice to be able to rationalize your infidelity so well. At an earlier point she is painted as so guilt ridden that she has to confess her first hookup with Glen. Not her last with Mel. She seems perfectly OK to deal with that. She's gotten a lot better at cheating with a clear conscience. I guess my point to all this is that a lot of the story is focused on creating a moral equivalence between George and Shawna's actions and I don't think there is any equivalence. He was pushed into his affair with Carol. God, how many men would tolerate a wife initiating an undesired fuck session while bragging how he was slopping around in her lover's leavings. I think most women would be unlikely to leave such a action without serious physical damage. There are limits to snotty behavior and Shawna blew right by them. So George starts up with Carol. That was actually a mild retribution. And of course Shawna LIES to him again. I didn't REALLY have sex with someone else. She is a piece of work. I wonder if they would have reconciled if George knew that she really DID have sex before raping and taunting him and about the final time with Mel. I doubt it. Shawna is trailer trash. She really has no morals and does what she wants to do without regard for consequences. George's only mistake was to avoid a divorce. Staying in the house and playing at a marriage is an idiot's solution. And he didn't even have the excuse that he "loved" her because I don't think he did for a good part of the story. Divorce and move on. Having said all that I enjoyed the story as a whole. It was well written and kept me entertained. People are flawed and that is OK as part of a story. Shawna got away with most of it. That bugs me.

Well if you haven't, then you stand alone. There is one thing I have learned about stupid, it feeds on itself. One stupid thing leads to another until you are looking at a mountain of stupid. The question is are you smart enough to learn from stupid. Both people were stupid and JPB outdid himself in showing that. In the end the only thing that mattered was did they care enough to see if stupid can be fixed. Well done JPB

but the genre as a whole. A bunch of these stories are about a married couple and some loser who can't get laid unless he finds someone in a vulnerable state, then gets tunnel vision and still can't get laid by more conventional means. Come on, Glen can't get laid with out booze and blackmail? Well, more harassment than blackmail, but still...

I actually felt that Shawna was a real woman in this.

She wasn't obviously a motivated slut, but she also had needs, emotions, got angry and was even a bit venal and dishonest. She also got tired.

Additionally, the husand was not made of adamant, unbending and being a Bill the Ger "Fuck her and the horse she rode in on". He WANTED to have back what he had before. But their timing was a bit off, hence the drama.

This was a good story. A very good story. I would put up with a lot less output if this was the regular result.

Sane people are not like that.

I don't get some of you people, you guys pick the funniest things to forgive. Most of you are like PETA people. You had people that us animals for lab testing but at the same time you use the drugs. When an animal gets killed your out for blood but at the same time you go home and cook a fat steak. Your all ways talking about forgiving people but when your the one who gets hurt, it fuck the world. so why not just get it over with and move on.

One can do nothing more than hold out prayer for a man like George. He was made to suffer great pain. His wife betrayed him in a bad way. JPB made everything whole again by the end of the story, but were this to be a real life couple, I frankly wouldn't hold out much hope for them.

There is a pathological element to Shawna. This is obvious from her submissive enjoyment of her lover's abuse. It is also evident in her continuing dishonesty throughout the story. She seems incapable of telling the truth, all the while proclaiming her all consuming love for George. Note the very telling incident at the club where the two spouses run into each other with their respective dates. Shawna declares that she has seen a revelation. She realizes all the pain she has caused. She has turned over a new leaf. She will go straight home and keep her legs together until George forgives her and they work this marriage out. She then rationalizes yet another sexual interlude before she even leaves the parking lot. This is ostensibly justified because she finds it unjust to send her lover home unfulfilled. Of course, she also manages to enjoy relieving the man immensely. Are we realistically supposed to believe that this woman is capable of marital fidelity now?

There is a reason why marriages have such a severe failure rate after infidelity. Relatively few make it for the simple reason that often the conditions that lead to the infidelity are never altered. In the case of this story, Shawna herself is the condition. George is probably going to find himself in very familiar trouble in a short while.

But this whole story made me uncomfortable. I did not enjoy reading it nearly as much as I have most of your other stories, Bob.

wont last, a slut is a slut, only worth the price of a bullet or the cost of a shovel, crack whore for cock,JPB a lot of your women are just fertilizer for a rose bush ,nice to look at but never touch them because all they do is bleed you dry the more you hold them.

you cant turn a whore into a house wife

level up man!!! yr stories r turning into shit

Her second time with Glen and then coffee with his sister, then tormenting him with the truth and leaving him totally aroused. Well, she then lied and said that she made it up?

Every time he gets close to wanting to work it out, she decides to be a hotwife slut and gets laid!

JPB, she is a closet slut, not wanting to be but the slightest excuse and she justifies it. He is never going to get over her morning after fucking so...

They both love each other very much but he is never going to handle her infidelity!

Sorry, disagree with the ending and that is sad...until she did Glen the second time there was a chance and the old thought - he waited too long applies.

Thanks, you're always a good read and BTW, when will he discover that she lied about the second time with Glen!

Okay, they had kids, that is enough to go through hell for. That being said, quick and brutal punishment is the best answer for a cheating wife and her scumbag fucker. First you make him disappear, not really hard to do if you think about it. Then you make sure she knows that you made him disappear. Then you fuck her anyway you like and she does anything you tell her to do. If she argues, you remind her. If she disobeys, she disappears. Remember, thousands of people "disappear" every year. It is not really that hard to make it happen.

Do you always have to put physical violence against the other guy? The story had a good plot, and the reconciliation was good, but the ending detracted from the whole.

Then your man would have been a man.

Its a shame four chapters bullshit, George is a fucking wimp

"I said that I was going to go straight home from here and then never have sex with anyone else. Technically as long as I'm still in the parking lot I'm still here and I said that once I got home there would be no other men for me.”

LOL, MORE stupid rationalizations! Just another cheating slut cunt!

Who knows why they got married? Who knows why they are married? Who loves their spouse, who loves their kids? In these stories it is hard to tell if these losers ever had a clue. Loving is caring. Spousal love, and parental love are supposed to be total, not partial. That means you do not do stupid things that are hurtful to your spouse or your children. Traditional parental love is unconditional, you love your kids no matter how bad they are. Traditional spousal love is not unconditional. In fact it is very conditional. Those conditions are listed in traditional marriage vows. Broken vows are betrayals, betrayals are acts that hurt the spouse. They are not caring and they are signs of a lack of love, if not contempt for the injured spouse. Why keep on trying to get passed that? It is simple math and it doesn't add up to love.

It just kills me when I read the comments that always criticize the stories where the couple gets back together. So let's have a formula for every story. One spouse cheats, we get a description of the acts constituting the cheating (just for the erotica) then the wronged spouse kicks out the cheating spouse, and the the cheated spouse kills or severely maims the cheating spouse and the lover. Brilliant! Also, boring and predictable. The only thing I didn't like about the story was the maiming of Glen. True enough, he probably deserved it, but it really didn't add anything of substance to the story. Good work, Bob.

KarenE said it all. He should have dropped the slut ASAP. Cheers!

that he never learned about her last time with Glen or Mel, but that's what happens in real life. She was constantly saying she "needed" him. Most marriage counsellors would tell you that was not an accurate feeling. Instead, she "wanted" him. A couple like this in real life - would they make it? Probably not bcs she seemed to enjoy sex with every man she tried. Swinging? We never knew about their finances. Would he have been destitute? If not, I'd be inclined to divorce and say no to shared custody or a liberal, scheduled time for the girls would be with him. "I'm not going to be your fucking babysitter, slut. I'll call when I'm free. If are not available, maybe they will be next time." That's easy for me to say bcs my kids were in college and beyond when my wife and I split.

Cheaters that they are, who believes they won't cheat again. And why not sue Glen before quitting? Free retirement money! Somehow I knew Bob would get us around to having them together. UGH!

...she's still just a cheater whore. And she'll go out and whore around more when she has the 'need'.

I know, I was married to one. I stayed with her for the kids, but after the first time I found out she was fucking another man, I never touched her again. We slept in separate bedrooms, said hi and watched tv with out children. But we never slept together, never kissed either. When she first tried to kiss me after I found out, I guess the look on my face was so filled with revulsion, she ran from the room crying, she knew it would never work out.

She swore she stopped fucking her coworker, but I never believed her. I'd hear her vibrator and jack myself off, but I know she kept fucking him. You know how I know? Because she stayed at the same job working with the same guy. They found ways, I'm sure.

12 years I went without and she knows it. You know how? Because she knows me. Every day for those 12 years she apologized to me, but could she get unfucked? No more likely than I could ever love or trust her again. When our youngest left home, we drove her to the university and when we got home, I handed her the divorce papers. She looked through them later that evening, after she'd quit crying and signed them.

I haven't seen her for 4 years since our oldest was married. She was married second. But she didn't look too good, it seemed like she'd aged twenty years. The kids tells me she lives alone, never dates and tells them how much she loves me. But I know, I know good and well she still fucks that guy from work. Do you want to know how I know? Because I have a buddy who works there and he got me pictures. Said he could get me pictures of them doing it almost any day. All the while, she swears to me and our girls she's a fucking nun. Yeah, she's never went without nun.

Whore. I hate her guts and everything she did to me and our family, but also our lives growing old together. Cunt.

What a fool his is. Divorce the cheating, lying bitch.

All these macho men with the "whore" and "cheating bitch." All you lack is the opportunity and you'd be the same. Someone cheated on you? This is how you get back at them? Sure, JPB is a hack writer that churns out thousands of bad stories, but this is some of his best writing. You don't like the conclusion so you break out the "whore bitch." Move on, let all that machismo go. You couldn't hang onto her. We get it. Therapy is the answer. You won't get it here.

Shawna was far too much of a disgusting, cheating, mean spirited whore to ever be considered for reconciliation.

Pretty stinky story here.

Her original cheating was no more of a mistake than her subsequent cheating. Women want to be men's equals? Then learn to control yourselves and accept responsibility like a man. No sex for six month's? So what? She wasn't starving. Many people go for YEARS without sex. When she went out and fucked him again, she proved that all she cared about was herself. The other two fuck buddies only confirmed her selfishness.

Sure, having your wife fuck other guys is a turn off and a deal breaker. Worse, is finally realizing what a selfish cunt the mother of your children turned out to be. She cheated on her FAMILY. That includes the kids. That is unforgivable. It is easy to take abuse for the greater good. It is intolerable to let anyone hurt a hair on you child's head, let alone be willing to destroy their home, their childhood, and possibly their lives out of pure selfishness.

Anybody with a brain didn't need the last paragraph. Just

unessessary for anyone who likes a really dramatic story and not some BTB drivel.

Took you long enough to get to Glen! Unfortunately, to little to late! It was a wasted read!

Second time through.

I appreciate Shawna's willingness to make up by closing her slimy cunt and being willing to share her husband and humiliate herself by licking his lover off his cock. It was at least what she deserved.

She still needed a mental evaluation for being so disgusting and cruel to someone she supposedly loved.

Enjoyed the caliber of writing in this tale.

The kids are the glue, the reason, the energy to reconcile. Glen gave her something that no man has yet equaled, and certainly not her husband George. He knows, or will eventually figure that out. Carol will eventually be looking for long term companionship, and Carol is totally satisfied with his sexual prowess. He and Carol will slowly reconnect, and one day he will break the bad news to Shawna. Which will probably be OK, as Shawna knows George crippled Glen, and she will reconnect with Glen out of guilt. George and Carol will develop a true love affair, but never marry. Shawna will be fucking Glen again, but it will never be as exciting and satisfying as she thinks she remembers. Shawna will drink and eat more and eventually Glen will start seeing other women. Shawna will always regret destroying her marriage and her husband's ego. She will live alone once she becomes unfuckable by anyone she can stomach.

None of us men know exactly why women do what they do. She’ll take it up the ass from some guy she doesn’t really like, but won’t give it to you even though she does really love you. This is as true in real life as in fiction. We desire them, we love the, we let them hurt us without understanding why, but we still pursue, slaves to biology.

if you need some relief, use your fucking hand. It's more trust worthy than the whore he called a wife. Hell get a fucking hooker, the hooker is safer than the wife in this story. All it was, excuses for her cheating. Hell he's better off with Carol. At least he'll know where he stands. And he needs to cut ties with his sister. Most family members are on the side of their relative, she's willing to take in your cheating wife. She isn't worthy of calling herself a "sister".

Actually, Anon it is understandable why a woman might do the freaker stuff with other men not her husband. I'm a pretty kinky guy and have been into bdsm since I was a teenager (mid 40's now). I've also been with a lot of women (committment issues). Anyway, even in the long term relationships I have had (One 7 year and 2 two year ones) I started the relationships with pretty heavy bdsm, primarily because I didn't think it would go someplace, but eventually the bdsm part minimized quite a bit over time. You start making love more than just purely having sex when you are in love.

But I can understand even more so from a woman's prospective. For someone she loves in a long term relationship she doesn't want him to think she is a freak. For a lot of women respect is very important from their loving partner because that is something women don't intrinsically get in society. So many women would be more careful in their loving relationship.

Some of the best sex I have had is not with women that I have loved. Probably the best sex I have had and the only woman I have thought about sexually after the relationship was over (dated her off and on for like 6 months but not exclusively), was a woman I didn't really like outside the sex. She was very intelligent, highly educated, attractive, but just rubbed me the wrong way outside of the sex. Sexually we were very compatible. So when a woman chooses a guy for marriage he might not be the hottest fuck she has ever had. But, of course, us men with our male egos we want to be the best sex partner for our wives ever, and in some of our cases for every women we ever fuck.

Lastly, with women I have always taken what I wanted and they have loved that. Now mind you I'm not a Glen. I love women, love spending time with them, listening to them, etc. But sexually I'm very dominant and women react to that. I remember this one woman (had a doctorate from a top university) and I fucked her ass. I just assumed it. Didn't ask, didn't say I was going to do it, but during sex when she was already in a different world I got her ready for that and did it. In fact, she and I got into pretty heavy bdsm, that she had never experienced before and totally fell in love with it. I was apparently the first guy to ever fuck her ass and she loved it and fucking her ass became part of the regular sexual rotation with her. As happens with all of my relationships it ended, but we stayed friendly and the next guy she dated that she was very attracted to, she told me during sex he asked her if he can fuck her ass and she told him no. You just don't ask a woman something like that. For a woman to give up her ass it's a submissive thing and she wants to be taken. She doesn't want a guy to ask her. She wants a guy to assume it and if you build up enough heat in her she will do anything you want anyway and she will love it.

Mind you, in no way I am talking about raping or forcing a woman. I have dated dozens of women and EVERY single time the first time we had sex was at their initiation. But after that, from my experience, women like to be taken sexually. They don't want timid lovers, but ones that lead them to higher sexual fulfillment. But you have to be decent enough not to take her someplace she wouldn't want to go. That's where knowing and listening to the women comes in.

Totally unbelievable story about two repellent people.

Fairly well-written but both George and Shawna are so unlikable that it's impossible for me to care what happens to either of them. George is especially repulsive which undermines the basic premise that Shawna is so desperate for his love and tenderness when it's patently obvious that these are qualities that he doesn't possess.

LA

I'm now convinced that JPB only writes stories to intentionally piss off btb folks.

One of the few who always speaks the truth. In most of JPB stories characters acts like horny teenagers on ecstasy. It's sad to think that he really believes (and lives) by the same crap he writes. It would explain a lot.

I see all these comments about how people hate it. I don’t get it. It’s just a ducking story. Literally! It’s written for dramatic effect. Do I think shawna would be hot and horny after going six months without after the serious damage to her marriage? No. But it’s a story on an erotica site. It’s going to be hard to make it real life like and erotic. I happened to think Bob did a really good job with this story. Miscommunication and misunderstandings were written perfectly. The reactions of hat Shawna and George have in the story to each other’s words are spot on. The ONLY unresolved issue, in my opinion, is the lies and things still left unsaid. George still thinks the night when she came back from Glen at the Marriott and screwed him while telling about it was a ploy and I get him to do something. Shawna, while very willing to make amends, really doesn’t understand George’s point of view. She enjoyed with someone else that which she would never tolerate from George. That’s a HUGE thing that I just don’t think she understands from his point of view.

Anyway, it’s just a story. A really good one in my opinion. Thanks Bob.

No Means No even if she is drunk or drugged. So Glen paid a price for being an asshole. Next time he does it he might not be so lucky. That husband might take his man hood, even castrate him.

The pathetic husband, the wife hit by the Martian slut ray, the idiotic "male pride" trope, and the gratuitous baseball bat revenge tagged on at the end . If only JPB had included a counseling he could have won cliche bingo. Still, he writes very well technically. Too bad he can't be more creative and relies on the same old LW plot devices.

Another bone headed husband who created problems with his intransigent approach.

Hey Bob no woman would ever want to be in a relationship with you, well maybe a mentally retarded woman or a whore but that's it, you really are miserable and just annoying, I understand why your wife and your own mother did what they did to you. Have a good night ☺

. great entertainment

What an arrogant twat George is.No wonder she succomed to some extra sex,why she didn't divorce him only she will know.

Your about as dumb as a bag of used condoms. Your the reason cuckolds exist. It's his fault, really? Maybe if you dad used a condom the world would be a better place.

Seems like no one is to blame in this story .. She Cheated and He should have sued the place where she works ..

He took the cheating whore back, but he did see to Glen. Now go cuck up Toby and Mel.

Like the Ayatollahs say, the cause of all the marital problems is wives working outside of the home.

Damn. Any story ending in reconciliation requires the author to enter the witness protection program. This did take very long and laborious writing to wend its way to conclusion. 5 stars anyway.

It's tough to read a story when young kids are involved. They are an emotional pull that makes you root for reconciliation. I'm happy George and Shawna found a middle ground. Good story JPB.

......rope and Hanging Glen ? Hanging him is to good for likes of him. Beating the crap out of him every 3rd or 4th month, with at least half dozens strikes with a stun gun to balls; poetic justice !!!!!

As for Shawna, she didn’t like it when Frank dominated, make her into cuckqueen, get her worked up and deny her orgasm till she shaking and begging for release, but only give her only one. If she can’t deal, to damn bad !!! Then there’s Mel and Toby, they get a pass because they were the result, while Glen was the cause. As for the sheep to say “Get over it and move on”, OH HELL NO !!!

Has everybody missed a key point? Before he went back to her, during his deliberating, he said that she had never lied to him. That's not true & he needed to press her & maybe his sister, who was Shawna's alibi about the night she came into his bedroom and impaled herself on his dick with her recently cum filled cunt and told him that it was Glen's cum, THAT was true, she later lied and said that it wasn't.

Does anyone think that he would take her back if he knew that she had actually shoved her soiled cunt onto his cock & bragged about it to his face? She doesn't lie? Did pretty good there.

Also: this BS about her needing to get "hers" and since he wasn't taking care of business it's OK for her to go get laid? George wasn't sucking it up fast enough? After what she did?

For me RAAC was a bad move for the husband:

She is a slut & destined to cheat again... move on George!

Bottom line it's another shit RAAC piece, wife is a lying slut. George should have dropped the Czar bomba on her and destroy her.

2 Stars on this Story .. I Live in a real world .. If My ex cheats on Me and I find out I divorce her slutty Ass ..I do not have sex with her again to claim her as my wife again . I got an STD from a Girlfriend once that way .. I did not get turned on when I caught My wife screwing another guy .. I did kick his ass and Divorce her . That ended up with 2 RO against Mei . And I hate restraining orders from the court . The guy was a Cluck and She was a Slut .

I forget if any if the parts tell us exactly how old this woman is? But they have been together 16 years by the end. So I'm guessing she is between 35 and 38 years old. And she just found out that she is a submissive slut for the right kind of dominant man? But doesn't like her husband to treat her that way? But with an overbearing asshole type she has more orgasms in one night than her husband gives her in 6 months?

And just like that they think after everything that has happened...what they did to each other? Her whoring around and rubbing his face in it. Him finding out he's wasn't the only sweet pussy around and then carrying on in her face with the other woman for months? Not to mention all of her additional lies on top of the horrible way she cheated on him...and this is going to work out?

If she is in her mid to late 30s. She still has at least a good 20 years left of high sexual needs. The story makes it clear that she is an attractive woman. And she now knows that she likes being a slut for other men. More than likes. She gets off like a rocket.

You don't think that things go along well for 2 or 3 years...they slowly get back to trusting again. He thinks things are good. And then she has to go out of town for work...and some younger guy with a big dick hits on her in a bar in LA on her 3rd night away...and she is feeling lonely...and abit M older and unattractive. And is a bit drunk? You think she's trustworthy in that situation??

Fuck that. She is gonna spend all night get used like a slut again and loving every second. Maybe that time she'll make the dude leave her room by 7 am so when hubby calls her she doesn't have strange dick in her cesspool of a cunt right at that minute. Just the strange cum leaking out of her.

This marriage is doomed. She is a slut. She lies. She justifies it. And she is gonna cheat again.

4 stars for outraging the dickless misogynists.

As usual Bob very good I am half way thru you manifest some are good some are excellent and some are stupendous keep up the good work Jaybee

I'm not a fan but I have to give credit where due. This was a pretty decent story.

However, until the evidence says otherwise, I will never agree that sex is a need in the technical sense- a compelling desire, yes, but a physiological cant-do -without demand like water, air, food? No. Makes for alot of fun tho.

Poor stuff.

Unlikable characters all around. Despicable actually.

Stupid story, incredible characters, what else ? 1 star is incredibly generous !

She was a slut. If she really loved George she would give him a divorce on his terms and let him find a decent woman with class. Not a slut who enjoys being used like a dirty rag, will feel bad about it, but only after she had enough orgasms.

Interesting take on how things can go wrong and get out of hand so completely. Well done

Thanks

What a horrible story. Typical JPB. Wife cheats and husband decides not to do anything to the point where it's the wife that takes action. How but you give the husband some balls.

You are one of the worst writers on this site. Awful story written by a gutless fool

One of your better ones.

Cuck cuck cuck! Ha ha ha!

"It would be one or the other, but it would never be both. But which one?" - Well, we know it can't be Carol, at least no more than a FWB relationship.

Another good one JPB! 5stars. Please keep writing. You may only write for your pleasure, but there are a great number of folks like me, who love your work!

To me this was all wrong. She cheated, love it and George blamed her. That should have been strike one. They should have talked it out and tried again or divorced. Then She cheated again and a third time. I need sex. Again, just anger and bitterness. so finally, he decides to come back, and the writer infers that George cripples Glen. Why. she fucked him and liked it. How was Glen to blame. I realize that people are seldom logical when it comes to marriage and cheating however this story is so illogical that it was hard to read. Sorry. BTRH...