All Comments on 'Getting Naked'

by MsEroticLover

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice first story

Add some more detail next time and it will be even better. But very nice first try!

MsLauraLeeMsLauraLeeover 13 years ago
Fun stuff

Fun little story. Sexy and it flows nicely.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 13 years ago
Loved it!

The story had a realistic feel about it that made it extremely hot. Hope we hear more about this couple. But keep it real. Don't have them move too fast.

tturtle50tturtle50over 13 years ago
I did!

Have been there!! Thanks for the Great story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great fantasy

This has been a fantasy of mine for a long time. Thanks for writing it down!

VulcezVulcezover 13 years ago
Keep doin' what you're doin'

Great short (and sweet) story. Loved the fact she (you) grabbed her husband for the hook-up and reveled in her decision to do so.

cutiegirl4004cutiegirl4004over 13 years ago
Loved it!

Great story! Please write more!

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Solid debut

Nicely handled -- and the restraint is laudable. Too many stories like this end up with everyone screwing each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice short erotic tale

Finally a new writer this year that has avoided the wimpy humiliating cuckold theme so popular with the new writers. Keep on writing in this manner and you'll become a hit with many readers. Thanks for the entertainment and your efforts to provide us with decent erotic reading material. ML

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What was

What was the point of your story ? Just two couples getting naked and not swapping what's the point?

ohnudeoneohnudeoneabout 12 years ago
Enjoyed

That was a fun story. Thanks for sharing. Now onto #2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great stuff

Wow now u need a part 3 love the first 2 parts thanks WTJF2w

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