All Comments on 'Getting Their Daily Quotient Ch. 02'

by Paris Waterman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
well timed depiction of this seduction

Your wording of the interlude in Martha's Dodge van was fabulous. Timing was excellent as you brought me in wondering about how this might progess. I enjoy finding a writer who will tempt the mind rather than throw common place and often over prurient descrfiptions as well as simplified plot twists into the mix.

Excellent work.

Please continue.

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