All Comments on 'Ghosts: CATU Book 01 Ch. 06'

I really hate like rape scenes and soon as i got to it i stopped reading and it killed the story for me. If i could vote you would get a zero a little warning would have been appreciated or you could have change the category for this chapter.

Thanks for your comment. Though it is not something I typically do use in my writing I feel it is an element needed sometimes. In this case like many, the world is not a nice place nor are people. My intent is to build a picture of just how the terrorists are and just how different each one specifically in the group are from each other. Like people in the real world not all have a violent tendency or need for rape but unfortunately there are those one in a few.

i understand your reasoning and agree with it fully. however since this story is submitted under novels/novella a little warning at the start of a chapter wouldn't be such a bad thing to do, in that case it's still the people choice whether the read it or not. and at least add rape in the story tag. cover all your bases so to speak.

for some, like anon here, it's a story breaker.

as a whole i'm still very much enthralled with this story and will keep on reading. the world out there isn't perfect and there are loads of types of baddies out there. in this case it fits the story.