All Comments on 'GI Bill Ch. 02'

by Modern_Citizen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
looking forward to your next chapter

keep writing

hunghandsumhunghandsumalmost 6 years ago
GI Bill Ch. 03

A great story so far and definitely room for expansion. Future installments can't come soon enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pointless to this point. All windup and no pitch. Why delve into his combat experience and love of weapons when he turns out to be a 25 year old who acts like a recent high school grad? A sorry story.

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