All Comments on 'Gia's Birthday Present'

happy birthday indeed!

That was H-O-T-T hot.

Well done hon! Just don't emphasise the gigantic cock, it sounds a bit false, besides a gigantic cock isn't everything. I believe it's how well the guy can satisfy me, not how much he can stretch my pussy.

I have two questions regarding their relationship. Gia coming up to dad like that and straddling him, you haven't really described how indepth or what type of relationship they had in order for him to let her do that. This relates to the second question in wondering under what circumstances the mother left under. If things were truly bad or stressful it might cause the father and daughter relationship to alter under shared stress. Well done for a first attempt. I might spend a little more time describing the sensations and feelings and developing the ideas, what was dad thinking when he was masturbating for example ?

great 1st story and hot.....so many ways to go from here...let us know more....

Delicious! Wish there was a bit more explanation of his cock entering her for the first time and the feelings she had, but a great effort!

That was some thank you for your present!

Im thinking about doing a part 2 which will give more information. Or I'll start another series.

and it was an enjoyable, if short, story. Needs padding out, explore feelings and add some more non-sexual dialogue and you could end up amongst the greats.

are off to a good start, Now you need to finish. Don't leave us hanging like this!!!

Short and quick, lol! Daddy obviously left his door partly open for his girl to see and hear, I bet he was watching out the corner of his eye so he could call her name ;) (thats what I'd do! Lol;).

Dad fell asleep as soon as they finished? Rofl!

Thanks for writing!