All Comments on 'Gifted Grifter Ch. 15'

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The_PedantThe_Pedantalmost 6 years ago
Good story line.

..... but spoilt a bit by too much sex!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Repetitive

Too much sex after the protagonist finds his girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Forgiven ........

......for the basket ball stuff in The Franchise!

A really good read, although for me, a bit too much sex action padding out the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Grifter

This is literally too good. Wow just Wow, what a ride.

It would be great if they branched out into do gooders .Maybe having to stop the other mind reader from being to evil or flood the market so everyone had a mind reader so no meglomaniac

It just seems to be begging for a couple story arcs.

9 stars or maybe 15 or more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
amazing

I feel like a bloody twat for saying anything about the errors in grammar/spelling...but good freaking lord that was an incredibly amazing series. Bravo

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wow

wow

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