All Comments on 'Gillian Newark's School Tales Ch. 01'

by SylviaG

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very good story

hope for more chapters also hoping for many humiliating dares for the teacher

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
I liked the premise,

but the writing didn't flow.

ms_magdalenems_magdalenealmost 16 years ago
Good beginning

This was a good start, I'm looking forward to more~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Keep Going...

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The writing was a tad clunky at the start, but improved as the story lengthened.

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Shall await the next instalment - but <i>please</i>, don't hurry your writing at the expense of the execution.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice story Miss

Don't stop now, she needs a lot of loven.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Start

Liked it so far, hope you finish it, thanks.

kalodinkalodinover 13 years ago
Top Drawer

You are a first rate writer. Thanks for a wonderfully engrossing story, real and loaded with exquiste sexual tension.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

such a turn on for me,making my sissiepanties so wet because my wife is a teacher wearing allways stockings&garterbelt with her high heels or wedges,and telling me how she teased students and other teachers softly stroking my clitty,but not allowed to cum,i like this story and looking forward to read SilviaG other stories,5stars

flick_46flick_46over 1 year ago

I don't think a lot f people appreciate the underlying eroticism. It is all a game and the play is the fascination. The act can be conclusion of game unless it leads to more of a play and is only part of the game.,

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