All Comments on 'Gillian Newark's School Tales Ch. 09'

How about Annabel's baby's father being Alvin, Annabel and Pete's father. He wouldn't be able to criticize Pete and Gillian, and we don't know what his wife did or said that would handle him!

If or however you continue, I'm sure it will be as good as the rest of your work that I've read.

A nice happy ending for Gillian and a sexy love story. Well done. My personal preference is that Zack is Annabels husband and he probably still has his mobile phone with him.

I have enjoyed the story but am feeling a bit let down as I was hoping for a couple more dares for Pete and Gillian. How about a flashback when Gillian remembers a final fling dare after Pete has done his exams and Gillian has handed in her notice and is willing to risk something at school. Or for the impregnation fans out there Gillian was dared to get pregnant by Pete that sounds like there might be an interesting story behind it.

Cheers.

The smirk gives it away. There's no way Annabelle could have been knocked up by Mr Hobson (gross!), and if Zack got her pregnant he would not have the style to marry her. Mr Appleby is too much of a wimp, and Dave will never leave his wife. That leaves Freddy and Sabrina's Dad.

Sabrina's Dad is not really a developed character, but Gillian fell for him for a while, so he must be capable of charm, and he would have access to her via her connection to Sabrina. But he's a skunk and not the type to make "an honest woman" out of Annabelle. Freddy is a sadist, but look at the temptation: he can now play Annabelle off against Gilliam and torture Peter once he gets a bead on him. Add to that the thrill of dumping Dave's wife, and it clearly has to be Freddy. Five stars. -- JB

Congratulations!!!

Very GOOD,

I had my toy in me the whole time mmmmmm