by Truth74
You're off to a great start. I hope that you write more soon. I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!
I liked this story, it rings true. Always fun to read about my fellow Black people having some fun and enjoying each other's company. Bring back romance in the community !!!
OOOHHHHH! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! AND PLEASE DON'T TAKE TO LONG TO SUBMIT THE NEXT ONE EITHER. THAT'S VERY ANNOYING WHEN THE AUTHOR LEAVES THE READER HANGING. BUT GOOD JOB!
I'm glad you show some of the interior dialogue especially Joanne's. I like her character, and Dan's, a lot. Please keep it up. We have our nerds too.
this is very interesting, i like this story i cant wait to keep reading