All Comments on 'Girl Scout Leader Training Ch. 02'

That was a great Chapter that you wrote about the training. It was nice to see how you described the sex scenes in the story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

This story is really good, one of my favourites on literotica.

Though it might be just a bit over the top its a great fantasy story for anyone who loves the outdoors. Its been my fantasy to make love in a tent for 30 years. I hope you can write several more chapters to this fun tale!

I am enjoying your story very much, please continue.

I really enjoyed this one. The action was hot, the tone was playful, no one was mistreated, and the women were horny. Thank you, and I'd definitely vote for continuing this series.

One small bit of constructive criticism: there were a few women who you describe as among the more conservative in the group, but this really only comes up when they're not acting conservative (e.g., fucking the guy). It would be more exciting for when a woman loses her inhibitions if we got to see her acting a little more inhibited first.

But truly a well-done story!

You need to keep this story going seems as if you have lots of options

I hope there wil be another I have to know how the rest of the trip goes. It was such a terrific story and I like your style of writing. its not only sex its got good context to it.=3

I am like you, a man should get the lady off first. Plus I get very turned on licking a woman to orgasm. I would love to have one cum on my face like in this story. Keep up the good writing!

The Outdoors and sex ( not necessarily in that order) and you combined them well! Even if the scenario is fantastic the style in which you write made the story engaging and hot. The few minor type-O's did not detract much from the whole.

Can't wait to see if there's a part 3

As the prior comment said, I'd be interested to see any sequels to this one some day!

I have really enjoyed this series of stories. I would really like to see it continued.

Why did you stop with this story. It was going great and so manyladies left to do. Some anal would be nice too.

I would also love to see more parts to this story :) You have an excellent, and very captivating writing style which works perfectly with such a wonderful story. Please continue!

You didn't remember that from the first trip? (Ch 00)

C'mon now

AGAIN, TOO short! Both times just get going and .....

You have left us AND them in the middle of nowhere, figuratively and literally

I would much rather you finish this off than foist another "Lessons" off on us

I love reading your works you frustrate me in that you leavers hanging please finish your stories we want more

Love the stories and the series.

Please finish the story

Ended to abruptly. There were some grammatical errors, but the plot is still good. I know this is one of your earliest stories and I have enjoyed many of your other writings.

Please submit the rest of the story and finish the hike. This could easily become a larger multi-series storyline.

Author, I beg you, please do not leave this unfinished!

It has been too long, please finish this story, it deserves it!!

Abrupt end.

Would love to get more of this

Please keep this series going. It is definitely worth waiting for.