All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Fun Night'

Just a cheating woman...Hope her boyfriend find that before he marries her....

I thought you had to be 18 to submit 'creative works' to LIT! This tale seems to negate that. The 'seduction' is 3 extra drinks? WOW! GMAFB!

2*

If you are interested in perfecting your craft, consult the "How to" section. There you will find great advice on how to built your dialogues and story. To me, your story was still too raw to be submitted, but I salute your guts.

I hope the boy friend dumps this cheating whore. BTB.

I.believe this fellow have up writing. He is a very smart man.

Another unfinished story. 1/5