All Comments on 'Girl's Night In Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sexy Series

This series is so sexy because no one has stepped over the line. The tension then is a big part of why I am enjoying this series. I hope you do not let this decay into a group sex session because the volunteer woman (who is now restrained and electrically teased without her control) has pleaded not to cheat and Lori does not want it either.

deadeye_76deadeye_76about 14 years ago
Where is...

the next chapter. I read this with great interest and I'm dying to see where you take it. I'd like to see you make it extremely erotic without anyone going over any of the lines they have set for themselves. But there are single women there and Lori sounds like she's willing to offer her husband to them.

Great story.

HatsudaHatsudaabout 14 years ago
Getting much more interesting!

You've managed to take an unlikely situation and made it seem much more likely, and in a very entertaining way. I'm enjoying this series very much, and hope to see your next submission very soon. Keep up the good work!

petboi69petboi69about 10 years ago

very exciting - please keep writing

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