All Comments on 'Giselle'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
excellent

Very good writing style and sexy story. Thanks for sharing with us.

PoutineFanPoutineFanover 15 years ago
Absolutely amazing :)

Wow. That was... wow. VERY erotic, without resorting to any of the more crude terms. Beautifully written. I, for one, hope that there's more.

TreysDreamTreysDreamover 15 years ago
You know how to write

Very good story, well organized and the action flowed well. Enjoyed the read.

Deeprider

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well Done !!! Hope there is MORE !!!

Lovely story,got my juices going,found myself getting wet. I hope you will continue !!!!

Momfrmnj

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
holy smoke!

your build-up was fantastic. You have a literary gift. Please do continue writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I Am <i>So</i> Wet!!

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There's obviously no real need to continue this story, but it would be nice if you did. Either way, I shall eagerly await more writing from you.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Beautifully written.

Sensual and so, so sexy. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Gorgeous.

Loved it. Very sensual, very slow and sweet. Very believable. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow

That was an incredible buildup that left me wanting more! So HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please keep the stories coming

Thank you! Please give us more.

StefanusStefanusalmost 14 years ago
Excelent...

Well writen.I could not fault it. Please continue with Anne and Giselle

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ohh yes

fabulous............... utterly absorbing,,,,,trully sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Nice, sexy. I was 58 when the woman next door,mid 40s, who was married and I had got quite friendly with, offered to massage my neck and shoulders. Well, she told me to remove my top, her hands were great, I felt relaxed when I felt my bra unclasped, a slight hesitation then her oily hands rubbed over my breasts and then over my now hard nipples, it felt so good, I heard her say lay down I did on my stomach, I felt her lift my dress, rub over my pantied bottom, then move her finger between my legs, tracing my wet pantied slit. She gently removed my panties, then slowly rubbed my pussy and my clit until I was pushing back with a massive orgasm. I slumped down, im sorry I said I don't know, she said ssshhhh, her finger gently probing my pussy. She lay on me and whispered turn over, I did, open your legs for me, I didn't hesitate to put my pussy on display as at first she licked around, then into my core, I unashamedly held her head, and finally when I thought I could take no more, she gently flipped her tongue over my clit. I exploded for the second time, trapping her head until I just went limp. feel better she said.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
MADE ME WET

I thought about the time I touched my friends clit was hot but when I touch mine which is wet and throbbing right now , I am going to scream in ecstasy. Your story had this effect on me . Wow, hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More Please

Wow this was great. Love your style

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Was a really good story

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