by angiquesophie
Erotic Horror isn't usually my thing, but I enjoyed this.
Just a minor nitpick. The mannequin was thrown out, in the dumpster - why should he have to pay for it?
I usually like your stories, but I was disappointed to see your choice was erotic horror for your July 4th posting. I was right. This wasn't entertaining in the least.
“Sometimes It’s better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all”
Are we men nothing more than planetary rotations around our suns?
Thanks for a good read.
At least let him take a piss on that Mannequin.
No doubt you can write and pretty good too. We like or hate your stories, there is Nothing in between... till today. 🤔
It was too late for him from the moment he heard it. Very dark and very enjoyable. Thank you!
I do not visit erotic horror often, but your story called me over. And I'm glad it did.
but the sex life of a mentally ill person is not interesting, nor erotic.
Save brevity.
Glad to see I wasn't the only one to go with erotic horror for this event. :)
Though this is outside my norm, I found it fascinating, it just drew me in, sort of like the mannequin did Nathan!
Very well done.
Thank you for sharing!
...The Twighlight Zone.
I imagine it being on tv in black and white, a brief intro by Rod Serling and the story unfolding from there to this trapped tragedy at the end.
Absolutely. I agree. It sails right past disconcerting and into weird but in a good way. I got the feeling that next he would start washing, dressing and feeding it. It could easily have gone in a Vincent Price "House of Wax" direction.
Thanks angiquesophie for a interesting read.
You are so good, you take my breath away with every story.
Your fan,
maninconn
you make me blush. i do hope you don't
go breathless for too long. would hate to lose a fan.