by Just Plain Bob
I enjoyed your few stories where the husband developed a spine, see you are reverting to your American roots it appears to be a fascination of of Americans to humiliate or be humiliated her husband should have shot her unless he was getting it somewhere else in which case they would deserve each other.
The story itself was reasonably well written although in my browser your stories tend to go off the right hand end (perhaps my stupidity) or maybe the way they have been formatted but makes reading hard anyway
There are "some" of us who are American's who are just as turned off by some of the sex play in this story as you were! Just because we live here doesn't mean everyone feels that way and is intrested in doing things like that. I can't believe you even suggested that. That doesn't really speak well of folks who make comments like this.
I think Bob as an author may be trying to "Broaden" some of our horizon's. Problem is at 36 mine are already as broad as they are going to get or I will allow them to be. And I think my stomach fliped over about 50 times attempting to read this story. I had to skip a few paragraph's of action just so I could finish the story to know how it ended.
-Writting style and imagery: were fantastic.
-Subject matter: not bad and well thought out.
-Sex scenes and suggested activities: I'll have to get back to you on that after I finish puking up my breakfast.
-Risq
What the hell is wrong with you? Eating another man's cum out of a woman's pussy is the most disgusting thing I can think of -as bad as eating dog shit.
Your stories always feature this cream pie eating nonsense. What man could stand to eat another man's cum? You are beyond fucked up.
Agree with majority here.
Spoiled what had been a fairly decent story.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Your fever for helpless males and or pathetic male humiliation seems to indicated an english heritage regarding the self cuckolding virus with the creame pie variant. Perhaps you lived there and become infected?
In any case, it is clear that more and more semi-human readers distain your talented work because as in the wizzard of oz, you need a heart to become more human and less demented in the demeaning of men.
Rather a shame - a waste except for the +/-1% of sick jaded humiliation freaks who love you to pieces.
I don't know if you meant it that way or not--but when I got to the end I just laughed my self silly. Here is a woman who wants a man on the side and a stay at home husband. The husband finds out life is terrible without his wife around. The boyfriend does not want to be responsible for the MILF. So eventually they end up back the way it was--who says you can't go back again. Very funny
JimDinMN
I can't think of many more disgusting acts than eating a pussy filled with another man's cum. EEEEwwwwwww. Absolutely no fun to read this garbage.
omg that was rotten , i puked after reading that crap . Any man that would do that is weird and sick
I personally find that kind of sexual behavior disgusting, but whatever floats your boat, I guess. And the fact that he was knowingly screwing a married woman didn't
much help me like the story any better.
Thanks for a great laughing fit!
Keep those juicy pies hot and creamy for me.... ;-)
If he likes eat another mans cum he should get it straight from the tap!!!!!!!!!