by Adelyn
You don't need a girly to suck your cock till you come in that expert mouth!
I was hopping that you would write another chapter where the young man learns the added joy of kneeling on the other side of the wall and making a man feel so good.
You are finding your level Adeyln, the descriptions are great and the tension and expectation build nicely. Love the twist at the end even though I had an inkling it was coming to make her trans was special. You are gonna do just fine girl!
I love a trick ending. This is a good short story. Keep writing.
Great story. A different perspective for me. Most of the stories that I have read about glory holes, is about sucking cock, not getting your cock sucked.
Liked that you waited for the fingers to ask for your cock, That is very important. Then you also gave a good description of the cum stained wall and oh yes the feeling or should I say the need to drive your body tight to the wall as you cum.
Nicely done Dear writer
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