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by theognis

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PepperPace over 14 years ago

Nicely erotic

Really good first story. I like how you were able to make a believable story about a quick, sexy encounter. Would love to read more from you.

theognis over 14 years agoAuthor

Thank you, PepperPace

You're one of my favorite authors, and your opinion means a lot. I realize this story is very short, and some people don't like such short stories, but sometimes things happen quickly, both in fiction and in real life.

soular over 14 years ago

What an erotic moment...

...inside Jack's life. I love that it was short...you only gave us a glimpse of what you wanted us to see. This intense quick moment in the life of someone already in strange territory. And the fact that her name was ommitted, was also interesting. I love it, thanks for the read!!

theognis over 14 years agoAuthor

An embarrassment of riches

Soular, I'm not sure my meager contribution is entirely deserving of such praise from another of my favorite authors, but I gladly accept it, and I thank you for your encouragement. Praise from you is praise indeed.

sweetalmondbrown about 14 years ago

Beautiful!

It was so simple, so beautiful, and so quaint. I love how anonymous she is throughout the story, it definitely adds to the intrigue. Lovely job!

Anonymousover 13 years ago

You have a nice way with words

Quite an enjoyable little taste of erotica. Short and to the point. I definitely look forward to reading more from you.

caramelcream over 13 years ago

A most enjoyable moment in time...

and I look forward to more from you in the future.

LadyGenevieve over 13 years ago

Exceptionally well done

and so very enticing. Leaving something to the imagination of the reader tantalizes and excites. Loved it.

theognis over 13 years agoAuthor

Thank you

I thank sweetalmondbrown, virgofemme, caramelcream, and LadyGenevieve for your comments. You are all too kind, but much appreciated.

PoissonSurLaLune over 12 years ago

Perfection is achieved when there is nothing left to take away

Or so says Antoine de Saint Exupery. Of course, now I am thinking of Le Petit Prince and porn together, which is wrong on so many levels O_o. It's a really nice snapshot of a brief, intense encounter.

theognis over 12 years agoAuthor

PSLL

What an exceptional compliment. I thank you very much.