All Comments on 'Godiva on the Scooter'

As one of lit's more mature set, I have to tell you that your story brought a bit more than a smile to my face. While I have no experience with nude women on motorcycles, I do recall in the not too distant past a long and silver haired woman a few years my senior, a sunny afternoon on a warm sand dune shaded by numerous tall oaks and . . . hmmm, maybe I should write my own story. Well done and thanks for sparking the memory!

A well told tale of bikerotica. I found it believable and arousing - both important in erotica. We often forget that desire and sex don't end with the arrival of the first gray hair. This story left me smiling - *and* wet.

Tess

Well told and, as others have said, quite erotic.

What I particularly appreciate is that it is a real story. It has real characters. It has a plot. Most importantly, it uses the sex to help tell the "real" story. That makes it much more interesting and memorable than the far more typical Literotica "man meets woman, man fucks woman (several times), the end" story.

A very pleasurable read. ;->

I'm not really coordinated enough to ride a motorcycle -- but stories like this one tempt me to learn. The sex develops organically from the situation, although I'm not clear on why our protagonist considered himself grotesque at 280 pounds. I can't really visualize him as well as I visualized her. Doesn't detract from the story, though.

"the sight of her waste"?? REALLY? I'm not a grammar Nazi, but good God man, at least get your vocabulary up to speed. And never waste a tiny waist under a great pair of tits