All Comments on 'Going At It With Liz'

next chapter please

More more MORE!! Next chapter please!

Excellent, I was hard the whole time. Can't wait to read more.

Loved it chapter 2 please

Reminds me of my first time!

I'm currently working on my next chapter, I'm trying to finish it tomorrow and then it'll be a few days before it gets posted. It should be on next week for sure :)

Definitely consider more chapters. Could clear up some grammar with the help of an editor.

It was a sweatingly hot, hot story.

Keep it up ... which is what will happen if you keep writing! ;) Nicely done. Spend more time on the build-up ... you kind of went from 0 to 60.

Made me feel like I was right beside you:)

Thank you, keep going. A great start.

That was great, so sexy and hot.

It was awesome. It really had me worked up

Very hot. A bit fast, but if you slow down the story telling

It will be more sensual.

Just awful writing! Ugh.