All Comments on 'Going Home Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for posting it! Great job! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Please post it soon! I love this story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
less leslie please

i love luke and johnny!! Gah so many emotions between them. Just take leslie away or kill him or something lol. Pls update soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Thank's for the great story - keep up the good work, I love this story so far.

RosemaryythymeRosemaryythymealmost 14 years ago

Yay!!!!!!!! New chapter. I love this story!!!! Please post again soon.

Nekk22Nekk22almost 14 years ago
I really like that its a threesome

Most relationships with three or more people involved are usually about the sex but with Luke, Leslie and Johnny it seems deeper than that. It was a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Less Leslie 2

I agree with the comment about less leslie. The story could do so much more with just Johnny and Luke.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yes!

I am so glad you're back, I've missed you and this story. I really hope everything works out well...please post soon!

misskikimisskikialmost 14 years ago
so complex

wow this story is so multi layered..i usually dont like the threesome theme, but because its such a deep story im sticking with it..but if you could find a way to cut leslie i would really appreciate it! love everything so far though! keep it up, cant wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Less Leslie 3

It's emotionally unhealthy, what's going on with Leslie. I want him to find someone of his own to love. But, hell, this whole story is emotionally unhealthy, and I love it! Keep writing and post pronto! I do hope that Johnny and Luke work it out, and no one goes to jail. Can't the business go legit before someone dies?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Love this sory

u are amazing this has to be my favorite story on this site. I don't care what happens because i'm sure what ever u come up with will be absolutely briliant. keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
liking it

I was glad to see this chapter, been waiting for it. some details seems odd, waiting for you to bring them together. pet peeve for me is that it's not "Your", its either "you are or you're" in the context you are using it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Soon

Loved it, please hurry with the next chapter soon... Thanks

Nekk22Nekk22almost 14 years ago
Having Leslie

in the relationship of Luke and Johnny makes it unconventional but u can't always wrap love in a pretty box and put a bow on top.

nomoretears00nomoretears00almost 14 years ago
Yeah! New chapter!!

Well, guess I'm going to be the odd ball here, and say having Leslie in the story doesn't bother me! I can't wait to see how this all works out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
LOVE IT!!!

i waited sooooo long for this chapter..... i love your writing.... please dont make me wait so long for the next one :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow

just read in one shot all of the stories of this author. and wow. just wow. winning alex is quite different from this one but both are amazing reads, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
brilliant.

this story is so amazing I hope you entitle to continue in creating a beautiful complex story. You are an amazing writer.

PheeGeePheeGeealmost 14 years ago
love it

I can't wait to see where this goes. I admire your bravery in expressing that even criminals experience love and all the pain that comes with it.

Contest4JenContest4Jenalmost 14 years ago
=)

ok so i need to know what happens, im hooked on this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
How long

How long do u intend to keep us waiting? I love this story so much please please please post the next chapter.

armywife2009armywife2009almost 14 years agoAuthor
Soon, i promise

I just got back home from my vacation, chapter 4 will be up soon i promise thanks for being such big fans :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

What I do not understand is, why there is no description of Luke Leslie and Johnny? Or, have I missed it somehow? What's their looks like? There is only : how tall they are and the color of the eyes of Luke. That's disappointing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
U better

I hope so ur an amazing writer and this story makes my oh so boring life so much more interesting so to say I'm hooked is an understatement. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

What I don't understand is how Luke and Leslie can say they love Johnny when they act like assholes. You don't hit somebody you love. You don't threaten to beat the shit out of them. And when Leslie told Luke that Johnny was back, that didn't seem like something a person would do to somebody they love.

I'd like to see Johnny meet somebody completely new, fall for him, and get out of that very unhealthy relationship.

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