All Comments on 'Going Home Ch. 07'

Okay... This was by far the BEST of your chapters so far! OMG, my heart was breaking when Luke and Johnny faced off and Luke told him he messed up by getting caught. You have now earned the Wicked stamp of approval for torturing a reader to within an inch of tears. You go girl!! I am *so* looking forward to the conclusion of this, btw, you've really hooked me with this story. I don't know what it is about these petty gangsters but I love them. Keep writing, Doll, I'll keep reading!

I've been waiting for this update since forever....yeah, that long :) I am seriously in love with this story. The angst *sighs* I kinda hated Luke in this chapter but who knows what's actually going on in that thick, egotistical head of his. Please update soon!!

I agree with the other person this is by far the best part in the story. Until I read this chapter I really didn't like this story as much as your other ones. I always felt like something was missing but with this chapter it seems like everything fell into place. I can't wait to read the next part and see what happens. I hope you post it real soon. Thanks for such a great chapter.

Please dont wait to long to post the next one. i absolutely love this couple.

Was very glad to see this chapter! Now I understand what's going on between these two much better. And yeah, what Luke said to him was a big 'ouch' moment. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please take the time to edit your work.

I enjoy your story lines but you really need to edit. The number of grammatical errors is appalling.

plz post d nxt chap fast.....dying to read it.........plz plz plz post it soon

Ok I admit the story has a few grammatical errors but ur writing this for free and it's dam good. There just haters; for an author writing for free ur amazing.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!! WAH - I can't believe it will be the final one (tear!).

And pls don't go crazy about the edit comment below - we are just glad you are posting period. If you want, I am more than willing to edit for grammar or whatever after you post (if it will get the postings out any faster!).

Thanks again, your works rock!

Who cares about a few errors, this chapter like all the others was soooo good!! Please don't make us wait a month for the next chapter! I will keep looking for it!

Since some just say edit without really offering help, you should post the next one totally unedited just to spite them! :)

this chapter is great...its still intense and draws the reader(me) in and it makes me want MORE...so your job is done, great series and keep up the wonderful work

To my wonderful critics yes i do edit i just obviously am not that skilled at it lol i appreciate the critiques though, i wouldn't know what im doing wrong if no one told me. Thank you everyone for all your great comments your the reason i write these :D I promise not another month i really do. If anyone would like to help me with editing (and of course read the next chapter before it comes out) i would be very grateful just send me feedback to my email. Thank you again for everything you say :D

to be clear, you don't need to change or refine the story, there are just some grammatical errors that can easily be fixed. and in response to a previous comment, yes some of those errors can detract from the story line. for me, i get pulled out of the story all together when i see "your" when you mean "you're," it's a personal pet peeve. there were also a few spots where i wasn't quite sure what the sentence was trying to say or it seemed like a word was missing. i think you'll find that having someone else give it a once over will fix nearly all of that. but your writing style itself is very good. great voice and i like how the story has developed. i was apprehensive that telling both timelines simultaneously might be distracting, but you've handled it extremely well. i'm very much looking forward to the conclusion of this one!

Its great to see how they broke up. Gives us some more insight. Cant wait for the last installment! Hurry please!

Alright I Want to know if the next chapter is really going to be the last and if ur gonna post it be4 Halloween if u are then I will love u for eternity because u will save my holiday. This story makes any day you post a good one. Hope u post soon

Please post it's been almost a month already and honestly I don't care if it's edited or not as long as u post so please post

This story is phenomenal, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! But, as already pointed out, it's been nearly a month!

"I promise not another month, I really do"

PLEASE! Just drop us a line to let us know when it's coming :)

You're right, when you're right you're right! Look for it within the next two to three days depending on how long it takes for Lit to put it up. Sorry, i know i suck for taking so long! Thank you my amazing fans, please dont give up on me :D

You said two to three days and its been six days i think there might be some problem with lit so could you try to repost it Please and Thankyou

Its my husband's birthday weekend but it will be up soon cross our fingers! Thank you!

It is the absolute worst thing when someone starts an amazing story and then just stops writing. I love this story and hope you would continue it. Atleast just give us an ending if you can't write it anymore..they still haven't even gone on the date their supposed to go on....will we ever see the end to this potentially fantastic story? I hope so.

I am checking back everyday to see if it is posted yet i promise i didn't abandon the story i even broke it up so its not the final chapter because so many people didn't want it to be. I'm sorry its taking so long i look everyday to see if its up :(

New chapter posted :D

Cant believe im reading this story now..... Oh well;patient dog, fattest bone and all that. Great writing. All dose pissing about the editing have NEVER written a story before. Im so into the story i dont even see any mistake, and if ur smart, u just replace the errors in your head and enjoy the beautiful story. Just one peeve tho....... Why the fuck is Mike still alive? He should be six feet under by now, barely a memory. Yet he still has d guts to show his face? SMH. I hope u killed dat mo'fucka in the nxt chapter.