All Comments on 'Good Bye Promise Ch. 02'

You are being way too hard on yourself. Keep writing. :)

I agree with the first comment, you are being to hard on yourself with your writing, it is actually fine and great the way it is because I read all the way through without stopping. I can't wait to see where this story is going. But I must say I thought it was odd that Colee did all the dressing up to go out just to end up back home prepping no more than 5 minutes when they showed up at the resturant...lol. But other than that the story was a good read, keep up the good work.

Ha, thanks guys.

I think the reason why I'm so harsh on myself is because I've been writing for so long, and with it being a serious passion of mine, I'm just naturally critical of my work.

it was totally perfect please dont wait too long to update andi hope this story has a happy ending :)

I loved it! Hurry up and write more!