All Comments on 'Good Evening'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Would have loved it a little longer , or is the more to cum! Thanks again

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot, nicely written

enjoyable erotica, though is may have been a little fast, you know, wham-bam ... thank you, ma'am.

But most of the editing was well done, good proof-reading. The only exception I noticed was where John "pulled her left breast from the cup of her bra and began tonguing her nibble.", probably should have been her "nipple".

Thank you, and bring us more some time!

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