by HiddenDevil_
Good story. Some of your descriptions were hard to follow and the grammar got lost. Get those and you will have a complete package.
You have the complete package now. Don't mind the whiner dick heads who jut have to be negative baby, you rock! Fantastic work. Keep kicking the shit out of the boring fuck tards who can't write!
I wanna see you bring Mandy into the story some more,...
I was really liking this series but this chapter made trisha a horrible friend n seem like a sex addict who lets her lust over take any rational thinking a regular person would have. Betraying her best friend, putting dick ahead of her obligations to school n cheerleading, n just becoming a bad person. I hope either she realizes this n changes in the upcoming chapters or there are serious repercussions to her actions. Other then that it had been a reallg good series n thnx for sharing it