All Comments on 'Good Girls Get Pierced Ch. 01'

You right very well and the scene in the bathroom was incredibly erotic. I look forward to reading more.

I enjoyed reading this story & I hope you will post the next part to it soon.

A wonderful story, on of the best introductions I have read. I love how the girls different interests in Art show the differences in their characters, the way the look at the each other and the world, in their likes, and their interests.

Excellent setup. I liked the way you used each girl’s art preference as a way to build out her character – it should be fun to see how that expands. Plus the way that Erica submitted to Kia in the girls room was hot, hot, hot!!! Looking forward to more!

Oh my....

Not just as a piece of masturbation fiction this story is well written but of course we all know why we are here ;-)

I do love this story and how it played my strings. I was devastated when I looked at the posting date and realized that chances of reading more of this are so slim :(